{"n": 1, "what": "model sheet v1 rendered on a plain ground", "saw": "profile reads as a dog; lying legs went through the floor; fore/hind knee bends reversed; rear-view turn frames tangled (tail through head)", "change": "swap bend sides, clamp folded knees to the boards"}
{"n": 2, "what": "first scene frames 0.5 s, 3.6 s", "saw": "world reads: cut-away house, patterned room, dusk porch; contact shadow too wide; 3.6 s still mid-turn profile", "change": "faster turn (3.46-3.72 on twos), narrower shadow"}
{"n": 3, "what": "turn contact sheet 3.42-8.6 s", "saw": "rear-view in-betweens a tall tangled 'giraffe'; tail swung the long way round; Q2 tail stuck out of the lying mound", "change": "tail angle mirrored on the near side, lying tail curls along the boards, redrew the rear view broader and lower"}
{"n": 4, "what": "first full film (38 s, 912 frames) and checker", "saw": "ALL OK; but the dog small for the ending; light from the door weak; nose touching the woman's hand; look-in read as looking up at her", "change": "camera push-in 21.6-25 s with re-painted layers and line widths divided by zoom; stronger light; person sits further in; new head drawing in34 (back of the head to the viewer)"}
{"n": 5, "what": "turn sheet again", "saw": "RV->Q2 in-between still collapsed to a sliver", "change": "root cause: mirrored outline reversed its winding so the in-between paired opposite points; kept winding after mirroring. Turn frames now read as a dog throughout"}
{"n": 6, "what": "walk crops 16.0-16.75 s; gait slip measurement", "saw": "one frame at 1.08 s had a leg stretched to the door (uninitialised swing start); legs thin", "change": "initialise swing start; measured stance slip 0.0 cm; thicker legs"}
{"n": 7, "what": "stills, cards, whole-film sheets at 1 s", "saw": "title fell back to a default serif; yard below horizon unpainted; roof a flat wedge", "change": "explicit font loads; painted yard; thatch strokes on the roof; final rebuild, checker ALL OK"}
{"n": 8, "round": 2, "what": "critic round 1 PASS (narrow), five repair conditions", "saw": "(read reviews/round1.md)", "change": "see n 9-13"}
{"n": 9, "round": 2, "what": "tail during look-back/rise 7.46-8.3", "saw": "tail hung across the middle under a head drawn too far left, reading as the chest side", "change": "look-back head moved over the far (right) shoulder (pivot x 12->20 standing, 12->17 lying); tail held out and down off the rump (a0 -122 deg) until the body turns; T kept 0.95 to 8.25. Checked every frame 7.92-8.33: tail at the rump, away from the head"}
{"n": 10, "round": 2, "what": "door light 6.2-7.4", "saw": "uniform warm radial haze over the porch", "change": "haze removed; a soft-edged wedge of lit air from the opening falling from lintel height to the boards, a pool brightest at the sill, sill and frame catch it, all growing with the swing; the cut-away room is held dim (0.5 overlay) until the door opens. Checked every frame 6.0-7.5"}
{"n": 11, "round": 2, "what": "rear view 3.65-3.72", "saw": "featureless bean (head hidden behind the shoulders, hind legs behind the rump)", "change": "rear-view head pivot raised above the shoulders; in the rear view the hind legs are drawn in front of the rump. Checked every frame 3.58-3.83"}
{"n": 12, "round": 2, "what": "low hand from 6.8", "saw": "read as a lowered arm", "change": "open palm turned up and held level toward the dog at knee height (sit hand 46,40 -> 50,47), 1.55x, with a pale cuff separating it from the sleeve"}
{"n": 13, "round": 2, "what": "retreat crouch legs", "saw": "spidery, splayed", "change": "legs fold under in the crouch (bone lengths x(1-0.24*crouch)); gait homes 22/18->20/16 cm, stride 0.40->0.34 m (max paw offset 44->33 cm). Rebuilt; checker ALL OK; stance slip 0.0 cm"}