FILM 070 V02 — INDEPENDENT CRITIC A, LIMITED CORRECTION CHECK
Verdict: QUALIFIED VISUAL PASS for dated records/editorial-loop distinctions and the corrected selection-limit card. Full sound/evidence relation and overall audiovisual acceptance remain INCONCLUSIVE, as in V01. This narrow review does not claim an independent full V02 native-speed rewatch.

Method: Independently extracted and inspected current actual main8s and42s plus control28s at full resolution. All extractions succeeded. V01's whole-sheet main/control review and source-metadata audit are preserved in CRITIC_A_V01.txt; reported changes are wording only. No audio audition occurred.

At40–48s the actual42s frame now says INSIDE THE CAPSULE and specifies 'Neither selected launch photograph shows the spacecraft cabin.' It retains 'A limit of these selected pictures; no concealed event is alleged.' This corrects the earlier ambiguity between spacecraft interior and the photographed LCC room. The claim is directly supported by the two selected pictures: exterior launch and people viewing from LCC windows, neither showing the cabin. It does not imply all NASA coverage lacks a cabin image.

At4–24s the actual8s frame displays published-transcript wording 'Lift-off on Apollo 11.' and still explicitly denies frame synchronization. I confirm the displayed spelling and attribution; I did not independently hear or word-align the quote. Actual control28s retains held-photo/no-editorial-audio-loop context and the dated LCC image.

Remaining limits:
The corrected card makes a valid selected-picture coverage claim without requiring an unaudited assertion that a particular named spoken action occurs under it. The heard effect of source20–28s during the blank and the repeated source0–4s fragment remains unverified. A visual wording repair cannot certify those auditory relationships, intelligibility, felt repetition or final restored-context effect. No new sponsor, concealed event, room recording or synchronized audiovisual take is established. Dates and metadata continue to support the bounded chronology, not an exact shared photographic instant.

Largest remaining gap / acceptance condition: independently audition main, control and original audio; identify the actual repeated unit and assess whether repetition/blank/restored context adds a precise evidentiary relation rather than generic rhetorical insistence. Preserve the newly specific capsule wording, visible loop labels, side-by-side nonmatching-instant qualification and separately dated recovery.