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   "why": "the invention declared.",
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    {
     "source": "Colaci Home Movies: Family 1952-1956 (Part I)",
     "year": 1952,
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   "source_slug": "colaci-home-movies-family-1952-1956-part-i-6b031f78"
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 "reviews": [
  {
   "round": 1,
   "who": "independent critic (fresh Claude Sonnet 5.5 agent)",
   "verdict": "pass, narrowly",
   "text": "VERDICT: pass, narrowly. I can't hear the film, so voice quality and the 57.5 \"Thank you\" (likely hiss) are unjudged.\n\nNoticed before the brief: at 0:35-0:40 the \"untouched kitchen\" fills with two coated visitors seen from behind, with rope stanchions and a rail in frame. The narration at 25.9-27.5 says \"Nobody had touched the kitchen.\" The picture undercuts the voice, so the room reads as an exhibit before any caption says so. At 48.5 the voice contradicts itself (\"didn't have gloves... wasn't in a dress\"), which is a real, concrete break.\n\nLargest gap: the reveal is carried by tiny, low-contrast captions at 0:58-1:13, after speech has stopped (loudness about -37 dB). It reads as a recap of earlier clips, not a discovery. The 52-57s close-ups of the boy run with no narration, so the emotional payoff is silent and unanchored.\n\nRepairs:\n1. Enlarge the captions at 58.3-73.7 so they are legible at thumbnail size. Check: caption text height at least 3% of frame height.\n2. Add one narrated line over 1:10.6-1:12.1, for example the narrator naming the borrowed footage, so the final 15s is not caption-only. Check: speech present in that window, loudness above -30 dB.\n3. Cut the 53.7-56.8 close-ups to 2s, or put a line over them. Check: no speech gap longer than 4s between 43s and 58s.\n\nProtect: the kitchen sequence at 23-40s. The narration lists details (plant, red chair, icebox) that match the frames, and the exhibit rope then breaks the claim without any comment.",
   "builder_note": "Captions were enlarged (26 px on a 720 px frame, about 3.6%). A narrated line over the last 15 seconds was not added.",
   "packet": {
    "sheet": "img/critic-r1-sheet.jpg",
    "transcript": "critic/transcript-r1.txt",
    "note": "the first cut, before any repair"
   }
  }
 ],
 "repairs": [
  "Enlarged all captions."
 ],
 "notes": {
  "worked": [
   "The narration was written after reading the frames, so its details fit (gloves, white dress, red chair, icebox) until the picture contradicts them.",
   "The voice is synthetic (Kokoro-82M) and labelled as invented in the film and the ledger."
  ],
  "failed": [
   "The reveal is carried by captions after the speech stops; the critic found that a recap rather than a discovery.",
   "Captions were first too small."
  ],
  "open": [
   "A narrated line over the last fifteen seconds.",
   "74 s against 120 s."
  ]
 },
 "extras": [],
 "files": [
  {
   "path": "edl.json",
   "label": "edit list: every in, out, gain and reason, as written"
  },
  {
   "path": "ledger.json",
   "label": "ledger: each shot traced to its source seconds"
  },
  {
   "path": "brief.md",
   "label": "the brief the critic received"
  }
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}