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 "slug": "homonym",
 "title": "HOMONYM",
 "state": "proof in progress",
 "summary": "A hand draws a line on a sheet, then a hand draws a tree. A rabbit stretches at a curtain as a narrator says 'draw'. A woman draws a curtain, a hand draws a pen out of a drawer, water is drawn from a well, a line is drawn across a map, spectators are drawn to a hall, a will is read in a drawing room. The film ends on the first hand: the line gets a dot.",
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  "poster": "poster.jpg",
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   "why": "a second hand drawing, in colour: a tree being drawn with a marker, from a film for children.",
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   "round": 1,
   "who": "independent critic (fresh Claude Sonnet 5.5 agent)",
   "verdict": "inconclusive, leaning reference stronger",
   "text": "VERDICT: inconclusive, leaning reference stronger. Cannot hear the film, so the sound-based criteria go unjudged.\n\nNoticed before the brief: at 00:17.9-21.8 the voice says \"a place for everything and everything should be in its place\" over hands sorting a pen tray. This is the one cut where picture and line interlock. Before that, I read the opening as \"draw\" (hand sketching, \"draw the picture\"), then \"drawn\" by 24.8 (map line) and 29.1 (\"draw people here\"), then \"drawing room\" at 42.8. I took the word to be \"draw\" and the film to be an inventory of its senses.\n\nLargest gap: the senses are listed, not relayed. Each is a new shot with a new line, and there is no action that carries a sense across a cut. Stakes and tone never change. The \"will\" and candle section (34-50) reads as a separate dramatic scene that does not grow out of the earlier senses.\n\nRepairs:\n1. 29.1-34.0 and 42.2-49.3: the same footage runs on for about 5s each (the rows of near-identical frames). Cut each to under 2.5s, or the relay stalls. Check: no frame repeats across more than 3 consecutive sheet cells.\n2. 50.7-56.3: the return does recast the opening. The rabbit appears at 50.5 on \"What is it?\", then the hand draws the line at 51.6-52.8 and a dot lands at 52.8. But the panda at 54.0 is a non sequitur. End on the drawing. Check: the last 3s contain no new source.\n3. 24.6-34.0: three consecutive geography and tourism shots (map, hall, crowd) carry the same literal \"draw\". Drop one. Check: no more than two shots in a row carry the same sense.\n\nStrength to protect: the 51.6-52.8 return, where the line gets a dot and reads as a question mark.",
   "builder_note": "The senses are listed more than relayed: fair. The panda frame the critic called a non sequitur was the source clip's own closing cut, caught by a held last frame; trimmed afterwards. The long repeated stretches were shortened.",
   "packet": {
    "sheet": "img/critic-r1-sheet.jpg",
    "transcript": "critic/transcript-r1.txt",
    "note": "the first cut, before any repair"
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  "Trimmed the source's closing cut so the film ends on the drawing.",
  "Shortened the two long repeated stretches."
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 "notes": {
  "worked": [
   "Searching the lab's own word index (Whisper word timings for 4,559 archive films) for 'draw' found 25 spoken uses. Four of those films are in the cut: 'should draw in the picture', 'a line drawn from the center', 'things that draw people here', 'the drawing room'.",
   "Where no narrator says the word, the action carries the sense (the curtain, the drawer, the well)."
  ],
  "failed": [
   "I could not see this film's contact sheets or filmstrips while cutting it: every image read returned a request-limit error. I cut from search titles, Whisper word timings, durations and loudness numbers. After the cut I checked each reason against frames of the final film and corrected two that described things the frames do not show.",
   "The senses are listed more than relayed: nothing carries a sense across a cut except the pulling arm.",
   "A held last frame once froze a closing cut of the source (a panda); trimmed.",
   "48 s against 60 s."
  ],
  "open": [
   "A pivot that changes the stakes, not only the sense.",
   "Cut the repeated stretches under 2.5 s as the critic asked (partly done)."
  ]
 },
 "extras": [],
 "files": [
  {
   "path": "edl.json",
   "label": "edit list: every in, out, gain and reason, as written"
  },
  {
   "path": "ledger.json",
   "label": "ledger: each shot traced to its source seconds"
  },
  {
   "path": "brief.md",
   "label": "the brief the critic received"
  }
 ]
}