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 "slug": "collective-inventories",
 "title": "COLLECTIVE INVENTORIES",
 "state": "proof in progress",
 "summary": "A morning assembled from five films: a woman lays a table, a blind rises in Berlin, a woman at a sink, women washing in a river, a Dutch colonial washing channel and carriers. Each has its year or place on screen, and the film closes on a card saying it is not one morning.",
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  "poster": "poster.jpg",
  "duration": 72.09,
  "width": 800,
  "height": 600,
  "card": "ends with a 5 s card naming every source"
 },
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-woman-washing-clothes-in-a-river-89c2.jpg"
  },
  {
   "q": "carrying water jars on the head",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-carrying-water-jars-on-the-head-8c29.jpg"
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  {
   "q": "milkman delivers bottles early in the morning",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-milkman-delivers-bottles-early-in-the-morning-f142.jpg"
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  {
   "q": "street sweeper at dawn",
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  },
  {
   "q": "sweeping a floor in the morning",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-sweeping-a-floor-in-the-morning-f7f9.jpg"
  },
  {
   "q": "baker puts bread in the oven",
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  {
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  },
  {
   "q": "clearing plates off a table after the meal",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-clearing-plates-off-a-table-after-the-meal-7baf.jpg"
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  {
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  },
  {
   "q": "a man shaving in the morning",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-a-man-shaving-in-the-morning-798d.jpg"
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  {
   "q": "folding sheets, making a bed",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-folding-sheets-making-a-bed-14e6.jpg"
  },
  {
   "q": "opening shop shutters in the morning",
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   "sheet": "img/sheet-opening-shop-shutters-in-the-morning-1755.jpg"
  }
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    4,
    7
   ],
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  },
  {
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  },
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   ],
   "in_cut": true
  },
  {
   "img": "img/strip-162.jpg",
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   "label": "#162 Have I Told You Lately That I Love You? (1958)",
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    9
   ],
   "in_cut": true
  },
  {
   "img": "img/strip-174.jpg",
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   "label": "#174 What Is Business? (1948)",
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   "in_cut": false
  },
  {
   "img": "img/strip-209.jpg",
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   "label": "#209 Children Must Learn, The (1940)",
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    10
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   "in_cut": true
  },
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   "img": "img/strip-285.jpg",
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   "why": "first participant, intact: a woman laying a table in a 1940 film. Thirteen seconds of one job, no cutting.",
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   "why": "second participant, whoever raises this blind in Berlin; never seen. Silent source, room sound carried over from the table so the seam is audible as a borrowing.",
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   "why": "third: a woman at a sink, 1958, from a staged film whose husband is not listening. Keeps its fictional voice; fiction stays fiction.",
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   "why": "continued, close: one woman at a stone, 1920, Dutch colonial footage. Silent source; the Modesta river is laid under it and the ledger says so.",
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   "why": "widen: a whole channel of washers, in a street, filmed by someone from elsewhere. The handoff no longer reads as a continuation.",
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   "why": "carrying: what the washers would do next, if this were a day, but it isn't.",
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   "why": "carrying again, 1920. Stops before the camera's own close approach to a bare-chested woman at 9s, which the source film chose and this one declines.",
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   "why": "the unfinished task. Back at the sink, she is still washing and still not being heard; the film leaves mid-sentence and never comes back.",
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   "why": "return to the first film after its job: what she laid is now under a child's elbows. A different pace, and this film's own boast about pioneers, which the morning has not earned.",
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 "reviews": [
  {
   "round": 1,
   "who": "independent critic (fresh Claude Sonnet 5.5 agent)",
   "verdict": "inconclusive, leaning reference stronger",
   "text": "VERDICT: inconclusive, leaning reference stronger. I can't hear the film. Loudness and speech are the only audio evidence, and the speech is partly suspect.\n\nNoticed before the brief: 00:12.6-15.4 shows a cupboard shutter rising to reveal a ruched curtain. It is a clean, specific motion, but it is only decoration between two kitchen shots. At 00:25.1 a woman lifts a vessel in a small black-boxed frame, then holds on laundry at a stream (26.5-32.1). That is the strongest handoff. It sits next to \"Oh, my God\" at 27.6-31.2, which is possibly a false transcription.\n\nLargest gap: the brief asks for five distinguishable participants, and the sheet shows only about three. Two are the same American kitchen woman, and the rest are washing, carrying and coconut-hauling extras with no identification. Sepia and b/w stock changes carry the difference. Nothing visible signals \"editorial construction\". The English dialogue at 16-20 and 58-62 belongs to the kitchen footage, so it plays over the other cultures' action.\n\nRepairs:\n1. Put an identity cue (a text or voice marker) on each participant in 25.1-32.1, 33.5-40.5, 41.9-48.9 and 50.3-54.5. Check: each block carries a distinct label.\n2. At 58.7-62, remove the \"new clothes\" line, or move it clear of the sepia material. Check: no speech overlaps footage from another source.\n3. Add a visible construction title or caption between 62 and 67.1. Check: the closing text names the day as assembled.\n\nStrength to protect: the apron-back match cuts (16.8-24 into 55.9-60) and the return to the child at the table (61.5+), where the loudness lifts to about -23 dB.",
   "builder_note": "Year and place captions were added to the first five shots and a closing card says the day is assembled. Still only about three distinguishable participants. As far as the ledger shows, the spoken lines sit on their own pictures (the kitchen and table clips), not on the other cultures' footage.",
   "packet": {
    "sheet": "img/critic-r1-sheet.jpg",
    "transcript": "critic/transcript-r1.txt",
    "note": "the first cut, before any repair"
   }
  }
 ],
 "repairs": [
  "Added year and place captions and the closing card."
 ],
 "notes": {
  "worked": [
   "Silent sources get another source's room sound under them; every borrowed bed is in the ledger.",
   "A carrying shot is cut before the camera moves in on a bare-chested woman, which the source film chose and this film declines."
  ],
  "failed": [
   "Five distinguishable participants were asked for; the cut has about three.",
   "67 s against 120 s."
  ],
  "open": [
   "A task left unfinished, explicitly (the sink shot leaves mid-sentence but is not marked).",
   "A caption naming each handoff."
  ]
 },
 "extras": [],
 "files": [
  {
   "path": "edl.json",
   "label": "edit list: every in, out, gain and reason, as written"
  },
  {
   "path": "ledger.json",
   "label": "ledger: each shot traced to its source seconds"
  },
  {
   "path": "brief.md",
   "label": "the brief the critic received"
  }
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}